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Finnceline Chapter. 16

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Finnceline Chapter. 16

"Guys there is Death's Castle." Jake said pointing. "Sorry but no powers work here so don't harm yourself." "Oh great! Wait what about our ninja moves?" Blade asked "Sorry but the only way to get something from Death is a Musical challange so that means Fionna your beat boxing and Marshal and Marceline's bass. Only one of you can fight him." "I will do it Finn is my man and if he goes down then I should not deserve to see him."

Back at the kingdom... Finn is sweating, trying to hold back Kirui's evil. Princess Bubblegum came in. "I know Finn is married but please Finn be okay. Without our hero the Kingdom will fall." Princess Bubblegum said. Suddenly there was a sudden pulse in energy no its not his but DARK ENERGY! "You think you can stop me!" Kirui laughed. Princess Bubblegum screamed. "Kirui has taken full control now all she needs is time for her strength to recover!" Prince Gumball said. "Clever boy luckily I can still change forms!" Kirui laughed. "Wait that's impossible! You don't even have half of your strength!" "Maybe not but..." Kirui stopped Finn regained some control! "Guys I don't know how long I can keep her from using my undead body! You guys need to leave! NOW!!!" "Sorry Finn but Me and Gumball are here to help you." Princess said.

"Guys we are at the mine we are half way there and don't drink the water that's up ahead." "Why? What's with the water." Fionna asked. "It will make you forget EVERYTHING! Even your own name." "Okay then lets keep going!" Destiny said tugging on her mothers shirt. "Um you guys go ahead Death and Life are not a good thing" Lyssa said "Okay then just head back and help Finn keep control of his vampire form we don't want that physco to gain one of the universes greatest heroes. None of us will be able to stop her." Blade said. "Okay but I am going to get someone." Lyssa said exiting the death realm. "Who?" Jake asked. They faintly heard her say the name "Blaze,"

"Kirui stop controlling me!" Finn yelled as if her were talking to himself. "Never I like this body very young very strong yes I think I will stay FOREVER!" "Hurry guys! Kirui has almost half of his body and recover almost half her stregnth to!" Pg said. "Blaze I need your help!" Lyssa came up to the human boy. "Who are you?" Blaze asked. "I am Lyssa princess of Angels here." She touched his back and wings grew no not white wings nor dark but fire! Which disappeared soon after "What did you do to me!" Blaze asked looking very afraid. "I have made you a phoenix, bird of the sun, a bird who can die and be reborn." "But wait that means... I cant team up with the gang! With the power of the sun this is too bright for my friends!" Blaze looked at her with rage. "No worries here say this Flame sword and then throw your fist to the side diagonally as if you just pulled out a blade." "Okay then. Fire sword!" and then shot his arm to the side. "Wow a fire blade popped from my arm!" "You can now control Fire elements. For a move call out what you want to do such as a firey wings think of yourself growing wings you would put your arms in an X and throw them to the side." Lyssa instructed him to do so to fly to the Candy Kingdom. "Also if you wish to turn into a phoenix then say Bird of Flame for Ice is lame!" "Okay... BIRD OF FLAME FOR ICE IS LAME! Wow this is sweet I'm a bird!" "Anyways Blaze we gotta get to the candy palace or else We will have a greater threat.

"Kirui is taking over I can't hold her back she's gaining her strength and it's too much to handle RUN!" Finn snapped at them. "Um I think we should RUN!!!!!" Pg ran out screaming like a girl. "No Finn I can't leave you not in this condition." Kirui laughed. "Finn is no more! I Kirui have finally taken this body over." Finn's face looked nothing like his no more. Instead of her original face in Finn's body her eyes looked like ruby's and around it where white pearls. "Yes this form will do more nicely. But this form is not completely battle ready. She summoned most of her strength out. Her hands became claws as strong as a bear. The waist became a nothing more than the shape of a ghosts. Her haid however remained in its original form what changed was how it looked the shape stayed. His eyes looked like cracks down the hat he had worn had become pitch black. "I guess I should show my poor friends the new Friend! MWAHAHAHAHA" Kirui laughed at Princess Bubblegum.

The gang in the meantime have reached deaths castle and lost the challenge. "Finn's gonna die and this is all my fault! I have not only doomed Ooo but lost the only man in my afterlife." Marceline cried. "Say did Peppermint butler send you?" Death asked. Marceline looked around and saw Jake lip sink saying YES! "yeah." "Oh then here you go." Death said kindly with a semi-warming smile. "Your just gonna give this to us?" Marceline said removing her tears. "Yeah any friend of Peppermint is a friend of mine." "Here is your power plant. "Kirui saw the comet and hissed "No I'm too late!"

"Prince Gumball you toot get back in here she left!" Princess bubblegum yelled. "Okay oh look they did it the power plant!" "Now all I have to do is drop a couple of these candy canes a caramel apple these petals with a sprinkle of candy dirt and mix it with some sugar pix." Pg said "Finished here give this to Finn or Marceline or someone." Pb looked annoyed. "THIS IS JUST A MUDDY BUCKET, WITH SUGAR, CANDY CANES, SOME PETAALS, AND AN APPLE!" "Well it was a 75 25 % chance it wouldn't explode." PG said "Now please give it to them as I will now faint." Pg collapsed. "Ugh I can't believe this guys is the other dimension me."

The gang came out yelling "Princess where is Finn and why is the room thrased and is that PG on the floor?" "Would you like the bad news or the really bad news." Princess Bubblegum asked. "Lets hear the bad news." The gang asked. "Oh well, Kirui has taken over Finn by 75%." "MY DAD IS TAKEN OVER BY A FLIPPING OTHER VAMPIRE FREAK!" Destiny shouted. "What's the really bad news?" Marceline asked "Oh and your father is no freak Destiny." "Okay the really bad news is Kirui not only took him over but she's after you guys oh and her is how to stop her." She held out the bucket. "WHAT THE HECK IS THAT!" Blade yelled. "It looks like a muddy bucket with sugar candy canes some petals and an apple!" Fionna yelled. "Fionna dear I think he means THAT!" It was a firey bird. "AAAAA! the 4 screamed. The window opened, and There blaze stood floating. "What the heck Blaze!" Lyssa screamed. "What! Oh wait bird of light sorry guys." Blaze said. "Just please stay away from us atleast in your bird form." Marshal said "Deal." "Um guys..." Pb tapped them.

"Aw looks like my friends are here for the final battle!" Kirui laughed. "You can't harm me why don't we take this outside." Kirui asked which was quite strange for an evil doer. It was just sunset. "Finn I know your in there! Please Kirui let my husband go!" Then a storm rolled in. "This storm will last for about 2 days." Marshal said. "Guys back away I can do this!" Blaze said. "So it's me vs a mere mortal! This will end quick! Lets do this little man." Kirui laughed.

To Be continued...
Kirui what have you done!
Carhacters belong to CartoonNetwork
Blaze & Blade belong to me
Lyssa is ThePurpleStrawbery's OC
Destiny is Purplestar31
Kirui the villain is StormThe's OC villain

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well once They do i assure you it will turn out what i expected.
Think you can draw mine for me? Well if you can draw it then I will tell them it.
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Oh and I will seriously draw Blaze for you but I need an ide for his hair at least I wanna make him look cool